The water trickles slowly into the bright green, Mario-inspired mug bringing with it a waft of steam and a sweetly bitter smell that makes her mouth water at the thought of the creamy warmth that will soon blanket her taste buds. She’s too eager to take the first sip to let every single drop find its home before she takes the almost-too-hot-to-touch mug from its place. It slips into her hand like a familiar lover’s. She lets the heat get so, so close to unbearable before she sets it down again. She adds a couple spoonfuls of Splenda from the vintage yellow canister on the counter and stirs in the extra extra creamy creamer changing the dark brown to a smooth caramely color.
She travels with the mug, then, back to the couch setting it carefully on the table before she takes her
|his hair is actually much longer now|
“Nothing,” she says.
He shrugs his shoulders and goes back to his game while she reaches forward for the coffee that will now be just right or so she hopes. The first sip is like sunbeams on her tongue, warm and full of life. She sits back then, mug in hand, and blows a little on the still warm liquid before inhaling the aroma of the banana and caramel undertones in the coffee. The second sip hits her taste buds and is even better than the first.
She flips the television on looking for something to fill the silence but not in the mood for a record that would only distract her like music tends to do. Her favorite tunes would consume her instead of provide background noise which is not what she needs at the moment unfortunately. Looney Tunes will work, she decides. The boy sends her a thumbs up of approval. It’s the new show not the old classics. Fun, humorous, but also easy to ignore. It’s still somehow familiar though and just adds to the ease of the day.
She stays like that lingering in the semi-quiet moments. There is so much left to do this day. The house is clean, the animals are full and sleepy, the laundry is in the wash, the boy is done with schoolwork, but her day is far from over as the mug of coffee may suggest. It’s time to get to work on her own schoolwork, her blogs, her letters. It’s somewhat of a never-ending cycle, but she takes joy in being busy, in the words that flow from her fingertips to the white screen filling it up one after the other in academic pursuits, deep conversations, stories that beg to be told, and reflective essays.
As much as she sarcastically jokes about domesticated bliss, there’s comfort in these routines and the way she can sink into life like it’s a big comfy, purring, fuzzy couch and enjoy the little moments that make the day something unique.
I'm not sure why I decided to write about myself in 3rd person, but it felt right. I actually started this as a first person narrative, but it felt off. So, here we are. This was another installment of Sunday Confessions with More Than Cheese and Beer. The prompt this week was comfort. Thanks for joining me in my comforting routines every Sunday. Be sure to check out the MTCAB blog for the other linkups!!
Sounds like a perfect Sunday ❤ReplyDelete
Oh this is just beautiful to describe it as a viewer instead of the first person was brilliant. I thought it really added to the act of discovery to the story. Well done Jenniy I wanted to join you as a fly on the wall taking in all that love and comfort. 😊ReplyDelete
Because comfort is something we all yearn for and many of us find in similar ways, your writing this in the third person allowed me to see myself gaining comfort in these familiar ways instead of feeling like it's a narrative about someone else.ReplyDelete
I love this - it's poetic and so rich with imagery. :)ReplyDelete
Love days like that.ReplyDelete
As always, I am just blown away by your ability with words!! And a little jealous, too. ;)
I feel the same about coffee as you do. Something about it...I can't explain it. I love how you crafted this. I felt like I was hanging with you.ReplyDelete
I like that it's written in the third person, it makes the reader feel a part of it. A wonderfully descriptive gentle read :-)ReplyDelete
I live for that moment to sink into life like a comfy couch - and I loved reading this post. Mellowed me out after a productive day :-)ReplyDelete
Your descriptions are so detailed and accurate. It was like I was right in the room with you Love it. Coffee, happy kid, blanket, cats purring on your lap. That's pretty close to Heaven.ReplyDelete